40 days of poetry - Day 6

This one has two versions and I never could decide between the two, so here are both.  Ok wait. I like the 2nd one better, but they're so different I can't count one out...

Rhythm to the Rain

There's a rhythm to Your rain

That soothes my tired soul

One that man cannot maintain

And man cannot control

I let myself get lost

The drops beat like a heart

In the water, I feel tossed

But I'll never be apart

From you

From the one who makes the rain fall down 

And the one who quenches thirst

The one who watches me run into danger unrehearsed

The one who comes to save me

When will it be enough?

For me to trust you fully and 

And you to call my bluff

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The Rhythm of the Rain

You're like the rhythm of the rain

Your love pours upon us

Whatever we need for the day

That's what you provide

Your water reaches where we hide

Not always the same

But do the flowers complain?

Sometimes soothing; sometimes violent

Either way the thirst is quenched

I'll drown everyday

I'll ride within the wave of

The rhythm of Your rain