Words fail me pic

Words fail me pic

Thursday, March 13, 2014

40 days of poetry - Day 9

And this one is about Adam and Eve


Once upon no time
A darkness over the face of the deep
A spirit above water
Suddenly Word:
"Let there be…"

A place of light and darkness
Wet and dry
Plants, fruit, living creatures
And man, created in the creator's own image
Dominion  over all

But…still

Man looked over all of creation
And found not one fit for him
So His creator
Created

He loved man so much,
He was willing to give him what
He himself had been craving
Had been creating for all along
Companionship

Man slept
Woman awoke
Holding fast to one another
In the light of this new world
His eyes never left hers
Her hand never left his

He held them both

In giving this to His beloved,
The one He most wanted to be near
He knew it would not end as His soul longed
Man would be enamored with another
He wanted man enamored with Him. 
It didn't take long

They gave into
A passive darkness
An aggressive darkness
Seemingly uncaring, but unrelenting

They relented
And ate

He closed his eyes as eager teeth bit into the flesh of the fruit
And flesh emerged. 
As the sweet juice fell from his chin
He opened up his eyes
Where a contented sigh would have been
Was an astonished
Oh
Eyes never wider, he began to notice her,
Then himself
His blush as deep and red as the fruit he still clutched in his hand.
As it dropped to the ground, he turned his eyes away
For the first time
An echo on the deep
A whisper emitted from a hiss
Shame

The sticky drops trickled down her chin,
Onto her breast, down her body,
As his eyes followed the drops
She suddenly realized she was exposed 
Her blood ran cold and she stumbled back
Eyes frantically looking, searching anywhere for
Something to cover herself
Why hadn't she realized this before?
No longer carefree
Sin entered and the weight of it
Was too much to carry
What had changed?

Everything
And nothing
For they had always been exposed


**side note:  This one isn't finished.  My favorite part of this story is when, after the rebellion, whey they deserve to be left alone forever, God clothes them anyway.  That sort of sums up parenthood and God for me.  I haven't found a way (2 years later) to put that into words yet. 

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